Hollie- well done for doing two pages but there is only really need for one. By having the text not aligned to the left this looks a little chaotic and messy and there is really no skill being shown in terms of layout or text and image integration- it looks more like a list. Is yellow best colour to read clearly? Vary page number size or colour perhaps The win tickets image is clever. Most of the pictures are hard to see in terms of lighting. Go back to the codes and conventions of magazines- use suheadings/editor's note etc.
Hollie- well done for doing two pages but there is only really need for one. By having the text not aligned to the left this looks a little chaotic and messy and there is really no skill being shown in terms of layout or text and image integration- it looks more like a list. Is yellow best colour to read clearly? Vary page number size or colour perhaps
ReplyDeleteThe win tickets image is clever. Most of the pictures are hard to see in terms of lighting. Go back to the codes and conventions of magazines- use suheadings/editor's note etc.