Simple and effective but maybe a little too simplistic? Is font style for PALMS the same as the DPS? We need some kind of lead story to do with the band rather than their name only as otherwise we may not be tempted to read on? Integration on the right works well. Is the APRIL date a little large? Could you make this a little more complicated and have more references to music on here- maybe use some of the stuff from one of the contents pages? The straplines need a little detail perhaps. Image mostly clear but a tad grainy. PALMS sounds like a band name not a solo artist?
Simple and effective but maybe a little too simplistic? Is font style for PALMS the same as the DPS? We need some kind of lead story to do with the band rather than their name only as otherwise we may not be tempted to read on? Integration on the right works well. Is the APRIL date a little large? Could you make this a little more complicated and have more references to music on here- maybe use some of the stuff from one of the contents pages? The straplines need a little detail perhaps. Image mostly clear but a tad grainy. PALMS sounds like a band name not a solo artist?
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